朋友作文之朋友生病给建议英语作文

朋友生病给建议英语作文

【篇一：高中英语作文 建议信(如何学英语)】

写作

假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

1. 上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；

2. 词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；

3. 课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；

4. 每天坚持写日记。

注意：1.词数120—150词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数；

2.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

dear wang mei,

i’m very glad to have received your e-mail.

best wishes!

yours,

li hua

dear wang mei,

i’m very glad to have received your e-mail.now i’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn english well in high school. first of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that 众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance / essential.you should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.what’s more,try to your classmates in english out of class.in this way you can improve your listening and spoken english quickly.last but not least,you should keeping a diary,which helps improve your written english and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.

i hope these suggestions will be of use to you.remember:where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成 /the man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”. 一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。

best wishes!

yours, li hua

【篇二：八年级英语unit1 -unit4 作文指导】

八年级下册英语作文指导

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9.表总结：in short(总之)，in a word(总之)，

文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、不定式或动名词放在句首做主语，there be句型等。

宾语从句举例：i believe shenzhen will be more and more beautiful.

we talk about how to make the city beautiful.

状语从句---常用状语从句句型：

1)时间 when，not…until(直到…才…)，as soon as ,since,

2)目的 so that+句子; in order to (为了)

3)结果 so…that+句子（如此…以致于…） ，too…to do(太……而不能……)

4)条件 if，unless(除非)，as long as(只要) 5)让步though，although，even though（即使），even if （即使 ）

6)比较as…as…，not so…as…，than

不定式做主语：to read books in the sun is bad for our eyes.

动名词做主语：reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.

用好it is+ adj for sb to do sth. it is bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.

it is necessary for us to improve our english.

用好there be 句型：there is going to be an english competition in our school.

there will be more and more robots in 10 years.

there must be someone else on the island.

there have been great changes in our country since 1992.

五、认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰， 短语使用、词拼写是否准确等。检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。

下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：

1.we live more and more comfortable.

改正：comfortably(副词修饰动词)

2.we can get many information by reading newspapers.

改正：much information(不可数名词由much修饰)

3.there has many programs in tv.

改正：there are many programs on tv.(there be句型和介词短语)

4.i think ride a bike can keep our health.

改正：i think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)

六，段落的写作要求

一般来说，一个段落由三个部分组成；主题句，扩展句和结论句。

步骤：

1） 在动笔之前，花3-5分钟把自己的思路梳理一下，围绕主题思想考可能用到的素材。

2） 筛选最重要的素材，把与主题关系不大的剔除，最好列各提纲，这样利于动笔。

3） 确定人称及主要时态。

要写好描述清楚，结构严谨，表达流畅要注意以下几点：

1） 写一件事，讲清该事的事实；

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2） 用具体的细节支撑你的看法。

3） 按逻辑顺序安排句子；

4） 思路清晰语言连贯。

5） 段落长短要恰当。

6）

建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章，特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法，适当运用于自己的文章中。

书面表达实战演练

unit1 对生病的人的建议

假设你是mary 的朋友tina， 在得知她生病的消息后，你很着急。 请你给她发一封e-mail, 给她提出建议。

内容包括：1. 得知其病情后表示担心；2. 给她提出一些建议（至少3个）； 3. 祝愿其早日康复 dear mary, i am very sorry to hear that you have a bad cold. here i would like to give you some advice. first, you should take some medicine and rest for a few days. second, you had better drink lots of water. you can drink some orange juice,

it will be good for your health. also, open the door and let the fresh air full of your room. finally, it’s best to put on more warm clothes when you have to go outside. i hope you can get well soon.

yourstina 交通事故报告

2013年3月10日下午3：20 在胜利街发生了一起交通事故。 一个在街上玩耍的男孩被汽车撞伤，司机及时将男孩送到医院，男孩获救。

at about 3:20 p.m. in shengli street on march 10th,2013, a little boy, about ten years old, was playing on the street. he was so happy that he didn’t see the car coming toward him. when the driver saw the boy, he wanted to slow down, but it was too late. then the car hit the boy and they boy was badly hurt. the driver took the boy to the hospital at once. luckily, with the help of the doctor, the boy was saved finally.

动动手，写一写： 假如你是李华，你的同学小叶昨天下午回家时候撞到头了。请你给他发一封邮件，表示担心，以及给他提出建议。建议至少三点。 80 词

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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ unit2 招聘志愿者广告 are you looking for something fun to do? do you like to help other people in your free time? then join us and be a volunteer!

we are a group of people who like helping others. we have volunteer jobs for people of different ages. you can help people in many ways. schools need help to teach children after school. the old people’s home needs volunteers to help them with housework. hospital need help to cheer up the sick kids. when you see the look of joy on their faces after helping them, you will be happy, too.

do not hesitate(犹豫) to contact (联系)us. call mr, brown at 452-46, or send an e-mail to .

应聘志愿者

假设你是laura。你在看到上面的广告后，对志愿者工作非常感兴趣。请你写一封邮件给mr. brown, 向他介绍你的个人情况和意愿。

内容包括： 1. 你看到广告后的感受和意愿

2. 你的兴趣爱好及你能做的志愿者工作（至少3个） 3. 期望收到回复

dear mr.brown,

i read your advertisement(广告) this morning. i am very excited about the

volunteering job you offered. being a volunteer is a dream job for me. i would get a strong feeling of satisfaction when i see the animals get better and the look of joy on their faces. also, i never feel bored when staying with children. so i think i can help out with the following things: first, i can help to take good care of the animals. when they are sick, i’ll send the animal doctors and provide the food. second, i want to volunteer as a teacher in an after-school study program. i could teach kids english and tell stories to them. third, i could visit the sick kids in the hospital to cheer them up. i’m free to help on weekends. please write me back as soon as possible.

yours truly,

laura

动动手，写一写，根据上述要求，你也写一封邮件去应聘志愿者吧！80词

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_________________________________________________________________________ unit3 孩子该

不该做家务 should kids do chores at home?

some people think there is no need for kids to do chores at home. they should spend time on schoolwork in order to get good grades and get into a good university. while i think it is important for kids to help with chores. first, doing chores can help to develop children’s independence and teach them how to take care of themselves. because they are going to grow up, they will leave home and no one will be there to cook for them, do the dishes or fold the clothes. second, a family is a team, we should do our part in keeping a clean and comfortable environment. our parents work all day, it is unfair for them to do chores after work. also, it is not enough to get good grades at school. at last, it’s good for our health to do chores, we don’t have enough time to exercise at school, so doing chores is a good way to keep us strong. all in all, the earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.

动动手，写一写，请你写一篇支持孩子们应该做家务的文章，80词

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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ unit4 孩子该不该参加课外兴趣班

现在，社会上课后辅导机构火爆。请你结合你的亲身体验，根据提示写一篇题为“is going to after-school classes necessary?” 的短文。

内容包括：

1. 你是否也参加了课后辅导班？ 2. 你参加了什么课后辅导班？

3. 你认为参加课后辅导班是否有必要，并陈述至少3个理由。

文章一： 不支持课外兴趣班

these days, more and more students are busy taking after-school classes. i also go to english classes on sunday mornings. but i don’t think it’s necessary to go to after-school classes. first, students may easily get into the habit of depending on others. they don’t want to learn by themselves. second, students will not listen carefully in their normal classes if they get the same knowledge (知识) in the after-school classes.

third, students are very tired after a week’s study. they need time to relax. they can’t keep studying without any rest.

文章二： 支持课外兴趣班

these days, many students go to after-school classes on weekends. it takes up more and more of students’ time. but i think it is necessary to go to after-school classes.

first, there are many different kinds of after-school classes like piano classes, spoken english classes, 5 / 6

【篇三：英语作文范文】

根据汉语提示，给朋友彼得写一封电子邮件，介绍你最近的学习和生活。

1. 新年快到到了，妈妈前几天教我做香蕉奶昔

2. 上个周末，学校组织去博物馆游玩

3. 在那儿碰到了姚明

4. 姚明是中国著名的篮球运动员，今年刚24岁

5. 我长大后要当一名医生，帮助那些生病的人

6. 现在我需要学会照顾自己，做家务活

new year is coming. a few days ago, my mother taught me how to make a banana shake. let me tell you.

first, peel three bananas and cut them up. then put them into the blender. pour a cup of yogurt into the blender. next, turn on the blender. finally, you can drink it..

let me tell you something interesting. we have fun on the school trip last week. we went to the museum,

and we met yao ming. we were excited to meet him. he is not only a famous basketball player, but also a well-known player in america. we got his autograph and talked with him. i want to be a player like him. haha, seriously, though, i’m going to be a doctor, lot’s of people died of their different kinds of illness every year. helping others is interesting for me.

i’m a student now, i must look after myself. i’m going to do chores every day. i have enough time to enjoy

my good enough life.

_______by yang ting class14, grade8

dear peter:

how is it going? i had a great day off. my mother taught me how to make the milk shake a few days ago. i

can do it by myself now!

let me tell you something interesting. i went to the museum. he is a famous person. he played basketball in

nba. now he is 34 years old. he stopped playing basketball because of his sore leg.

i don’t want to be a player, i really want to be a doctor in the future. doctors can help others. i think that

doctor is one of the most important jobs. so i have to learn how to look after myself and study harder. i hope my dream can come true one day.

_________by zhou ruofei class14,grade8

dear peter:

new year is coming, three days ago. i learnt how to make a banana shake from my mother. it looks

delicious. do you want to drink? you can come to my house to have a try on vacation. i will make it for you by myself.

last weekend, we went to the museum on the school trip. there were many people . at the same time, i met

yaoming, one of the most famous basketball players in china. he is 34 years old this year.

but i want to be a doctor when i grow up. i will help people who are sick, and

help them get healthy.

now, i need to sweep the floor, take out the trash, do the laundry and so on. in a word, i should do chores

every day. finally, i send best wishes to you and to your family.

yours …

_______ by yang shu class 13,grade 8

以my dream job 为题，写一篇50—60字左右的短文。注意时态，人称，不可以背诵或抄袭课本内

容。

when i grow up, i am going to do what i want to do. i’m going to be a pianist. because music can make us

feel relaxed. so, how am i going to do it ? first, i’m going find a part-time job for two years or three. and i’m

going to save some money. then i’m going to study hard. next, i’m going to hold a concert. because i want to be rich and have a easy life. one day, i’m going to retire somewhere quiet and beautiful.

i hope my dream cam come true.

__________ by li xiao class13, grade8

when i grow up, i’m going to move somewhere interesting. america has manybeautiful places to see and

fun things to do. i’m going to move there. i will be a reporter. seriously, i’m not sure yet, but i like talking with people. and i think this is an interesting job. so i have to read lots of books and i’m going to practice writing articles more often this term. one day, i’m going to retire somewhere beautiful. i want to travel all over the world and go sightseeing in every corner of the world.

i hope my dream can come true.

__________by zhao li class 14,grade8

everybody has a dream job. i have a dream job, too. i am a student and i study in longcheng middle school

now. i’m not the best in class. my classmates are all clever. i study very hard. so my dream job is a university teacher. how can i going to do it? now i have nothing but time. first, i’m going to study very hard. then i will learn a foreign language. maybe french or japanese. i believe i can do better. at last, i want to travel around the world with my parents. and buy a big house for my parents. i

love them. one day, i hope my dream come true.

________by yang shu class13, grade8

i have a beautiful dream. when i grow up. i’m going to do what i want to do. i’m going to move to a

beautiful beach. then i can see the sea when i get up. and i want to be an engineer. because i think engineers are more talented than any other person. and then also have the best math. so i have to study math harder. i also want to keep fit. so i’m going to eat healthier food. at the same time, i also have to do more exercise.

when i’m old, i’m going to retire. and i am leaving for my hometown to spend time with my parents.

i hope my dream can come true.

___________by yan ruotong class14, grade8

畅谈过去，展望未来。

根据提示问题，写60-80字左右的作文

1. when and where were you born? 2.when did you start learning english?

3. what are you going to be when you grow up?4. how are you going to do that?

5. what is your new years resolution?

maybe i’m not the best in this world. i’m not different from others. i was born dec 29, 1998. and i was born in a small family. now, i’m a student in longcheng middle school. i’m happy in our class. because i have loving teachers and lovely classmates. although we have too much homework to do every day. i also love my parents. i have nothing but love. new year is coming, in the coming year, i’m going to study hard and get lots of exercise to keep fit .i don’t think i have a healthy lifestyle. i have a dream, i want to be a university teacher. i believe my dream will come true.

i’m not the best in this world. but i can do better by myself.

__________by yang ting claa14, grade8

i’m a student at longcheng middle school. i was born on april 16th 1999 in sishui. my grades are not better. so, this year i made a new year’s resolution, i’m going to learn an instrument and get good grades. sure, i’m going to eat healthier food and get lots of exercise. when i grow up. i’m going to do what i want to do. i’m going to move somewhere interesting. i’m going to find a part-time job and save some money. i want to travel over the world. one day, i will go the retire somewhere quiet and beautiful.

_______by du xianli class 14, grade 8

my name is yan ruotong. i am a student. and i study in longcheng middle school. i’m 12 years old. i was born on april 17th, 1999. and i was born in shandong. and shandong is beautiful.

i like to learn. i could speak when i was 10 months old . i could sweep the floor at the age of six. and i could ride a bike when i was seven. at the age of 11, i could sing well. now, i can do chores. but i don’t lie to do chores. new year is coming. i have some new year’s resolutions. i’m going to learn a foreign language. and i’m going to play an instrument. i’m also planning to do more exercise. and i’m going to eat healthier food. and i want to get good grades.

_______by yan ruotong class14, grade8

春节( spring festival )即将来临，你和家人打算怎么度过这一中华传统节日？请根据以下提示并适当发挥写一篇小短文，词数60词以上，文章开头已给出。

where are you going?

who are you going with?

how are you going there?

what food and drink are you going to take with you?

what are you going to do there?

how long are you staying there?

last spring festival i went to emei mountain and this year i’m going ...

last spring festival i went to emei mountain and this year i’m going to beijing. beijing sounds like a city that i could enjoy. i want to go there with my parents and my sister. i’m going to beijing by plane. because i never take a plane. and i will take some snacks and drink.

there are lots of places of interest in beijing. so when we get there, we are going to some museums first. then i’m going to the summer palace and the forbidden city. and i’m going to the great wall with my sister. i don’t like going away for too long, so i will stay there for four days.

i think beijing is very beautiful. and i hope i can forger all my problems.

________ by zhang kejian class13, grade8

last spring festival i went to emei mountain and this year i’m going to where i want to go. like yan’an ,beijing…but i decided on going to sanya. sanya is in the southern part of china. and it’s one of the most beautiful parts in china. sanya is more and more popular in the world. some people like it because sanya has a large beach. so i’m going to travel there during the holiday with my parents. i hear

sanya is very hot, i’m going to take some cool clothes. i’m going to take the train there. it’s very funny. i’m going to eat some specials in sanya. wow! it’s very delicious. i can’t wait.

________by qi yahao class14, grade8

last spring festival i went to emei mountain and this year i am going to beijing. beijing is a city that i could enjoy. i’m going there with my parents. i’m going there by plane. i really don’t like to take train at all. i will take sandwiches and some pieces of brown bread, and buy some juice on the way. because we can’t live without water or food. haha~~ i’m only joking. i’m going to visit forbidden city. i also plan to go to the great wall. it’s the longest in the world. i will go to cube of water and den of bird. i can’t wait! i’m going to spend all the time in beijing. my holiday will be more interesting than last holiday. i have enough time to enjoy the great enough holiday.

________________by yang ting class14, grade8 根据所给的材料，写一篇不少于70词的英语短文。

姚明，1980年9月12日生于上海，现为中国国家篮球队队员，2002年参加休斯敦火箭队 ，现效力

于休斯顿火箭队 喜欢的颜色：蓝色，红色 喜欢的食物：西红柿 喜欢的节日：国庆节喜欢的演员 成龙李连杰 业余爱好：打电脑游戏、上网冲浪、音乐、看书

参考词组：

休斯顿火箭队 the houston rockets

成龙 jackie chan 李连杰 jet li

thyao ming is one of the most successful basketball players. he was born on september 12

1980.he left his country and played basketball in nba in 2002. and plays for the houston rockets now. most people think he is a real hero. because he is friendly to others and likes helps others. although playing basketball in nba is a hard job, he did id well and becomes famous. he loves his country, so he like national day best. and he likes red and blue.his favorite food is tomatoes. and he likes jackie chan and jet li. they also are famous stars. in his free time , he likes to surf the internet, and play computer games and reading.

____________by zhou ruofei class14, grade8 i’m a boy. i like playing basketball very much. so my favorite basketball player is yao ming.

th yao ming was born on sept.12 1980 in shanghai. he is a professional basketball player now.

he plays for his national team. when he was 22 years old, he joined the houston rockets and played for the hoston rockets for a long time.

i watched a piece of news on tv yesterday. it was about yao ming. then i knew something about yao ming. he likes blue and red. he likes tomatoes, because he thinks eating tomatoes is good for his health. and his favorite movie stars war jacket chan and jet li. during his free time, he often surfs the internet. and listens to music. he feels very relaxed.

_____________by zhang kejian class13, grade8

yao ming was born on september 12th 1980. he is a professional basketball player. he now plays in the houston rockets. he joined the houston rockets in 2002. he likes blue and red best. yao ming likes to eat tomatoes. he has never forgot his country and his favorite festival in national day. he’s a hero in my heart. he likes jackie chan and jet li. but i think he is better than any other person. he often plays computer games and listens to music. yao ming , the best basketball player in china.

_____________by zhao li class14, grade8