读后续写的好词好句反复应用

读后续写的好词好句反复应用。（描写时间，动作，心理和情感）

(感谢瑞安中学吴志老师分享）

情感好词： 喜乐

① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.

② A simile of understanding flashed across his face.

③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.

④ Laughter lingered around the room.

⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.

⑥ A wild gaiety（快乐） took hold of her.

⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.

⑧ I was wild with joy.

⑨ I was pleased beyond description.

⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.

⑪ Her smile lit up the whole room.

⑫ She shed tears of joy.

⑬ Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.

⑭ She was o verflowing with happiness.

⑮ Her flushed face was shining with excitement.

⑯ Joy welled up inside her.

⑰ I was floating on air.

⑱ Amusement gleamed in his eyes.

愤怒：

① I was seized by anger.

② He was fuming with rage.

③ His anger boiled over.

④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.

⑤ He was breathing fire and fury.

⑥ His voice trembled with anger.

⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger.

⑧ He glared at me with burning eyes.

⑨ He flared up at the word.

⑩ His face clouded with anger.

悲伤烦恼

① He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.

② I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.

③ Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.

④ Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.

⑤ She burst into tears and ran out of the room.

⑥ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.

⑦ I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.

⑧ A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.

⑨ They sat there with glum looks on their faces.

⑩ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.

⑪ He brimmed over with sorrow when...

⑫ They were immersed in sorrow.

⑬ These days he was in low spirits.

害怕：

①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.

②Fear slowly creeps upon her.

③She was struck with horror when...

④She was choked by fear.

⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.

⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.

⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.

⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.

感动：

① Touched deeply/immensely, we…

② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.

③ With tears streaming down her face, she...

读后续写一（25分）

A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.

On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.

The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown thebaskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours？” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly（胆怯地）. “Have you killed the man？” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man？” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man？” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet？” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. The officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.

1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.

Paragraph 2:

The farmer was lucky .A few days later, ...

Possible answer:

Paragraph 1

The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer trembled with fear. (情感) At that very moment, (时间) he wondered (心理) whether he would be sentenced to death for killing people. “But I am innocent!” he reminded himself (心理) constantly. He was determined to (心理) tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. He hoped (心理) that maybe (心理) someone could come and save him.

Paragraph 2

The farmer was lucky. A few days later (时间), a young man came to (动作) the police station, surrounded by(动作) a group of journalists, declaring (动作) that he had spotted (动作) the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He happened to see (动作) the police officer using a knife to kill the man late in the evening. He was so frightened (情感) that he rushed away (动作). So the young man realized (心理) the police had arrested (动作) the wrong person, and he took the great courage (心理) to expose the real criminal. After the investigation (动作), the young man was proved right and eventually (时间) the police officer was sent into prison. On hearing (时间) the news, the poor farmer burst into tears (情感). The brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.

读后续写二（选考真题25分）

One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp' and walked away.

With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.

“Tom! 'she cried. 'Help!'

No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.

Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.

As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1

But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.

Paragraph 2

It was daybreak when Jane woke up.

Possible answer:

Paragraph 1

But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. At that moment (时间), she felt a little sad, but she wasn’t so frightened (情感). She reminded herself constantly, (心理) “ Tom must have called for those helicopters. Maybe (情感) he was in one of them and will return soon(动作)! I have to guide him tomorrow.” She felt asleep (动作) and dreamed of seeing Tom (动作).

Paragraph 2

It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then(时间) walked along the stream, hoping (心理) to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. Suddenly (时间), she spotted (动作) a huge flat rock. She managed (动作) to climb onto it and waited. The moment (时间) the helicopter appeared (动作) again. The nearer it got (动作), the more she waved (动作) the yellow blouse. To her great joy, (情感) the helicopter didn’t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and rushed (动作) towards Jane. They hugged each other tightly (情感) and burst into tears (情感).

读后续写三（样题25分）

A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car

moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthur said.

“I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.”

“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said, “Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”

“No trouble at all. I’d be glad to help.”

The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.

It was from the bank. There had been a robbery (抢劫)!

Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer.

Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right

into the young woman in front of him.

She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” H ethought. “The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!”

Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop,stop!”

Paragraph 2:

The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur...

Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting (动作) behind, “Stop, stop!” And at that moment (时间), Arthur suddenly (时间) realized (心理) that maybe (心理) the young man was the bank robber. Arthur was a bit frighteded (情感), and he continued to rush (动作) until he saw a taxi. He stopped it, jumped in with the suitcase and told (动作) the driver, “Go to the police station, please. The man shouting (动作) behind is the bank thief !’’ The taxi raced away like the wind.

Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur told (动作) the police what had happened. On hearing (时间) his story, the police was determinded to(心理) find out the truth about the robbery. They opened the suitcase and to their surprise (情感), they spotted (动作) a large sum of money inside it. Then (时间) the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other suitcase. Later (时间), with the information, the police arrested (动作) the robber. The police and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot.

读后续写四（25分）

Christmas Day was coming. I was just a kid then, and my big sister told me there was no Santa Claus. I fled to my Grandma because she would be straight with me. I knew Grandma always told me the truth. Grandma was home, and I told her everything. She was ready for me. “No Santa Claus !” She shouted. “Ridiculous! Don’t believe it.” That rumor has been going around for years, and

it makes me mad, plain mad.

“Now, put on your coat, and let’s go.”

“Go where, Grandma?” I asked. “Where” turned out to be Kerby’s General Store, the one store in town that had a little bit of just about everything. As we walked through its doors, Grandma handed me ten dollars. “Take this money, ” she said, “and buy something for someone who needs it. I’ll wait for you in the car.” Then she turned and walked out of Kerby’s.

I was only eight years old. I’d often gone shopping with my mother, but never had I shopped for anything all by myself. The store seemed big and crowded, full of people competing to finish their Christmas shopping. For a few moments I just stood there, confused, holding that ten-dollar bill, wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker, who was a kid with bad breath and messy hair. He sat right behind me in Mrs Pollock’s grade-two class. Bobby Decker didn’t have a coat. I knew that because he never went out for recess(放假) during the winter. His mother always wrote a note, telling the teacher that he had a cough, but we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn’t have acough, and he didn’t have a coat. I would buy Bobby Decker a coat! I settled on a red one, which looked really warm, and he would like that.

“Is this a Christmas present for someone?” the lady behind the counter asked kindly, as I laid my ten dollars down. “Yes.”

The nice lady smiled at me, put the coat in a bag and wished me a Merry Christmas.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper

Paragraph 2:

Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it...

Paragraph 1: That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper. She wrote “To Bobby, From Santa Claus” on it, after which she drove (动作) me over to Bobby Decker’s house, declaring (动作) I was actually one of Santa’s helpers. Grandma parked (动作) down the street from Bobby’s house, and rushed

to (动作) his front door, trembling (情感) with excitement. Seeing (动作) no other people notice (动作) us, I placed (动作) the Christmas present down, pounded his doorbell and then (情感) Grandma and I hid in the car.

Paragraph 2: Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally (时间) it opened. Out went Bobby Decker and his mother. To Bobby Decker’s great surprise (情感), he spotted (动作)the coat in the bag and then (时间) his mother gave him a hug (情感). On hearing (情感) them say “Thanks” to Santa Claus, I felt my eyes filled with tears (情感). At that moment(情感), I was dertermined to(心理) be Santa’s helper for ever. It was on that night that I realized(心理)the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.