恩波教育英语研究所
预测作文（一）
The Pursuit of Foreign Diplomas
1. 现在越来越多的大学生热衷于国外文凭； 2. 你对此事的看法。
【范文】
Since the education quality of foreign developed countries is thought to be better than that in China, an increasing number of college students are keen on studying abroad. College students believe that with foreign diplomas they may be considered more competitive than others, and can get more job opportunities or higher salaries.
Undoubtedly, studying abroad offers college students chances of learning more advanced knowledge, experiencing different cultures, broadening their views and gaining good command of foreign languages. But the blind pursuit of foreign diplomas may cause a considerable number of students to neglect the pursuit of knowledge, and forget about the huge amount of money they need to prepare. What's more, concentrating on the diploma itself may lead to students who aren't expert at academic studies directly buy fake foreign diplomas.
All in all, I think college students should consider clearly what they really want to gain at foreign schools, for an inflated reputation or knowledge. Besides, they should make decisions after careful consideration on the family’s payment ability.
【点评】
文章由人们对国外发达国家的教育质量的观点引出社会现象----大学生热衷追求国外文凭。第二段介绍了出国留学的几点优势，并指出对文凭的盲目追求会使得大学生忽视对知识的追求。最后一段结合自己的观点给出建议---大学生应该仔细考虑自身需求，并结合考虑家庭的支付能力。
第一段中 be keen on doing sth.意为“热衷于做某事”；be considered more competitive意为“被认为更有竞争力”。第二段中Undoubtedly意为“毫无疑问，毋庸置疑”， blind pursuit of foreign diplomas意为“盲目追求国外文凭”；lead to意为“导致”，所在句涉及who引导的定语从句。第三段中All in all意为“总之”， family’s payment ability意为“家庭支付能力”。
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预测作文（二）
Campus Security
1. 近年来，大学校园安全问题频发；
2. 象牙塔如何能给学生一个安全健康的学习环境？
【范文】
According to recent reports, an increasing number of crimes have taken place on campus. Universities around the world are facing security problems such as theft, fraud, violence, sexual harassment, fire disaster and traffic accident etc., which seriously affect students' school lives and make students live in fear.
Therefore, it is high time that we should take actions to improve its current situation. First, related departments, including administrative personnel, teachers and students, should know clearly about their own responsibilities and cooperate to solve the problems. Second, equipments such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible. Most importantly, we might have to nip something in the bud before it becomes a problem. We should strengthen college students' ideological and political education, pay attention to their mentality health and give timely help if they need.
With our endeavor, campus security will be improved greatly, and universities will be holy places where one can enjoy peaceful and harmonious atmosphere again.
【点评】
文章第一段指出问题---校园安全问题频发，大学生的学习生活受到严重影响。第二段提出需要解决问题，并给出解决问题的建议：首先相关部门应该弄清自己的职责，共同努力解决问题；其次在校园中安装监控设备，尽早发现犯罪；最后，加强大学生的思想政治教育，防范于未然。
第一段中affect students' school lives意为“影响学生学校生活”；make students live in fear意为“使学生生活在恐慌中”。第二段中to nip something in the bud 意为“防范于未然”；ideological and political education意为“思想品德教育”。
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预测作文（三）
Working in Grassroots Areas
1. 大学毕业时有人出国留学，有人就职外企以及国企，而有人却选择偏远的农村，将人生扎根于奉献基层群众里，体现了难能可贵的思想觉悟和责任担当； 2. 谈谈你的看法。
College students vary their choices after graduation. Some choose to go abroad for further education, some are willing to work in foreign companies or state-owned enterprises, but there still others choose to work in rural areas, and they hope to realize self-value by working in grassroots communities.
As far as I am concerned, I absolutely in favor of this choice of working in grassroots. It is helpful for the development of rural countries.On one hand, college graduates can put into practice what they have learnt during academic years, which can promote economic growth of rural countries. On the other hand, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside, speed the cultural development of rural areas, and bridge the gap between the city and the countryside. What's more, it helps to ease the pressure of job markets in big cities.
In conclusion, it is a win-win choice to both college students and society, so more preferential policies should be made in order to encourage college students to work in the countryside.
【点评】
文章第一段通过陈述大学生在毕业时不同的选择，引出话题---有的人选择在偏远的农村工作，之后简单提及了在农村工作的意义。第二段结合作者自己的见解，说明这种选择的积极意义----促进农村的经济发展；大学生引入新的思想，促进农村文化发展，缩短城市农村间的差距；缓解城市就业压力。最后一段给出结论：对大学生和社会来说，这是一个双赢的选择。
第一段中realize self-value 意为“实现自身价值”，grassroots communities 意为“基层社区”。第二段中absolutely in favor of意为“绝对支持”，On one hand,…On the other hand意为“一方面„„另一方面”，bridge the gap 意为“缩减差距”。第三段中a win-win choice意为“双赢的选择”。
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预测作文（四）
Job-hopping
1. 现在越来越多学生毕业后经常换工作；
2. 有人表示支持，有人表示反对，人们对此看法不一； 3. 你的看法。
【范文】
Frequent \"job hopping\" is common among graduates.More and more graduates take changing new jobs as a way of seeking higher salary or getting promotion. People have different attitudes towards job-hopping. Some think that one should stick to one occupation since one can never do his work well unless he is devoted to only one job in his lifetime. On the contrary, the others support job-hopping as it can offer one more chances of realizing self-value.
Before talking about whether it's right or not, I think graduates should ponder over the following basic questions: Why do you want to find a new job? What kind of jobs do you really like? One shouldn't blindly follow other people in job-hopping, and needn't expect to climb the corporate ladder by job-hopping. Eternal moves can be an effective way of getting a promotion or higher pay, but frequent moves suggest a lack of loyalty. What's more, the perfect job should be a combination of interest and work. So make out your plans for career development, think beforehand all those things related with job-hopping, and you will have a brighter life.
【点评】
文章第一段指出越来越多大学生不断更换工作，人们对此各持己见，然后给出了赞成者和反对者的观点。文章第二段作者指出，大学生在更换工作之前需仔细考虑清楚，防止盲目跟风。虽然跳槽可能会获得升职加薪的机会，但是也会造成雇主对“忠诚度”的怀疑。另外，在跳槽之前应该做好个人职业发展计划。
第一段中as a way of seeking higher salary or getting promotion意为“作为一种升职加薪的途径”，is devoted to意为“致力于，奉献于”；第二段中frequent moves suggest a lack of loyalty意为“频繁的跳槽暗示着缺乏忠诚”，think beforehand意为“提前考虑”。
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预测作文（五）
My View on Over-consumption
1. 有人认为过度消费会推动经济发展； 2. 有人认为则会导致浪费； 3. 谈谈你的看法。
【范文】
When it refers to over-consumption, some people think it contributes a lot to the economic development of China. It can enrich people's daily life and enlarge consumers' demand，which is an important factor to economic growth.
However, other people hold different opinions. They consider it is harmful to consume more than their everyday needs. Buying things they don't need not only causes waste of resources, but also causes one to be in debt, anxiety and overload.
It is true that every coin has two sides. But I think the disadvantages of over-consumption outweigh its advantages. In addition to the above mentioned negative effects, over-consumption could threaten limited natural resources and pollute our environment. Therefore, this unsustainable way of life should be changed and we should pursue a resource-saving and environmentally-friendly consumption life-style. As our government is advocating a \"conservation-minded society\" and an idea of sustainable development, we should cooperate to create a harmonious society.
【点评】
文章谈及过度消费，第一段指出赞成者认为过度消费刺激经济发展，第二段指出反对者认为过度消费会造成资源的浪费，并使人陷入债务、焦急不安的状况。第三段给出作者的意见--过度消费弊大于利，因此应该改变生活方式，共同创建和谐社会。
第一段中enlarge consumers' demand意为 “扩大消费者的需要”；第二段中not only…but also 意为“不但„„而且„„”；第三段中outweigh意为“比„„重要”，resource-saving and environmentally-friendly consumption life-style 意为“节省资源，保护环境的生活消费方式”。
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