高考英语作文热点+范文(精选)
一、北京冬奥
1.(2021·安徽·六安一中高二期中)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你正参加与法国巴黎友好校以“畅想奥运盛事”为主题的线上英语交流活动。友好校的学生Chris得知新近发布的2022年北京冬奥会的主题口号(official motto)是“一起向未来(Together for a Shared Future)”,认为这个口号非常棒。他请你进一步谈谈看法。请你根据以下提示进行发言:
(1)向Chris表示感谢并认同他的看法;
(2)你对口号的理解(体现奥运精神、同享共创未来、中国发出邀请等);
(3) 对2022年北京冬奥会及2024巴黎奥运会筹备工作表达祝愿。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, Chris; Hi, everybody,
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Thank you.
【答案】例文
Hi, Chris; Hi, everybody,
I want to express my most sincere appreciation to you. As far as I am concerned, you are definitely right. I can't agree more. The official motto of the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics is consistent with the core values and vision of the Olympic. We hope to convey to the world several layers of meaning, the first of which is the need to work together in the future. Current COVID - 19 brings all mankind the global challenge, so only by helping each other can we build a beautiful future together. Second, China is inviting the world to join hands.
In the end, I present my best wishes for the preparations for the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics and 2024 Paris Olympics.
Thank you.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生进一步谈谈2022年北京冬奥会的主题口号(official motto)“一起向未来(Together for a Shared Future)”的看法。
【详解】
词汇积累
感谢:gratefulness→appreciation
传播:spread→convey
美好的:good/excellent→beautiful
表达:show/express→present
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We hope to convey to the world several layers of meaning
拓展句:We hope that we can convey to the world several layers of meaning
【点睛】
[高分句型1] We hope to convey to the world several layers of meaning, the first of which is the need to work together in the future. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] so only by helping each other can we build a beautiful future together. (运用了倒装句)
二、亲子关系
2.(2021·江西·景德镇一中高二期末)假定你是李华,高三的生活即将结束,亲情、友情、师生情弥足珍贵。请你给你的父母、同学或老师写一封信,要点如下:
1. 写信的目的;
2. 你们之间难忘的事情。
注意:
1. 词数100词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】例文
Dear parents,
Words have always failed me when I have a strong desire to express my thanks to you for the loving care you have shown for me, especially since I went to senior three.
There were terrible times when I had problems in carrying out my assignments. It was Mother who approached, accompanying me with a cup of fragrant milk in your hand; it was Father who helped me regain the confidence to overcome the difficulties, challenging me to succeed in life.
As you know, those good memories will never fade away. I love you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给自己的父母、同学或老师写一封信,向他们表达弥足珍贵的亲情、友情或师生情。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感谢:gratitude→thanks
任务:task→assignment
克服:get over→overcome
帮助某人做某事:assist sb. to do sth.=help sb. do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句:As you know, those good memories will never fade away.
拓展句:As you know, it is those good memories that will never fade away.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Words have always failed me when I have a strong desire to
express my thanks to you for the loving care you have shown for me, especially since I went to senior three. (划线部分运用了省略that/which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was Mother who approached, accompanying me with a cup of fragrant milk in your hand; it was Father who helped me regain the confidence to overcome the difficulties, challenging me to succeed in life. (运用了强调句型结构,现在分词作状语)
三、新冠相关
3.
假设你是李华,你的父母在外地辛勤工作,原本约定回家和你一起庆祝春节,却因为当地新冠疫情突发导致封城而不能回家,他们非常内疚。请按以下内容给他们写一封信;
要点:
1、关心、安慰父母;
2、表达感恩之情;
3、送上春节祝福;
要求:100词左右
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【答案】例文:
Dear father and mother,
You are supposed to come home to celebrate the Spring Festival with me, but you feel very guilty for your absence, because the city was closed due to the outbreak of COVID-19.
I really hope you don't blame yourselves and that you should take care of yourselves. We are delighted to live in a country where the epidemic is under control. I would like to show my gratitude for the love and care given from my childhood. Your love keeps me growing. May your life always be filled with happy times. Happy Spring Festival!
Yours, Li Hua
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。假设考生是李华,考生的父母在外地辛勤工作,原本约定回家和你一起庆祝中秋节,却因为当地新冠疫情突发导致封城而不能回家,他们非常内疚。请按以下内容给他们写一封信。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
庆祝:observe→ celebrate
照顾:look after→ take care of
表达:express→ show
由于:owing to → due to
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Your love keeps me growing.
拓展句:It’s your love that keeps me growing.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I really hope you don't blame yourselves and that you should take care of yourselves.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] We are happy to live in a country where the epidemic is under control.(where引导的定语从句)
四、太空探索
4.(2022·重庆·西南大学附中一模)学校英文报征稿:给中国太空站(Tiangong Space Station)宇航员们的一封信。假设你是 李华,准备为学校英文报投稿, 内容包括:
1. 对他们为太空事业做出的成就感到骄傲;
2. 询问太空站上生活、工作情况;
3. 表达关心和祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear astronauts,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear astronauts,
I’m writing with great excitement to tell you how proud I am for your remarkable accomplishments made in China’s space expeditions.
With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation. Have you adapted to the weightless environment? If you miss your families, is it possible for you to make
video calls on a regular basis? Additionally, impressed by your interaction with us students in “Tiangong Class”, I cannot help admiring your pioneering work, wondering what it takes to be a qualified taikonaut.
Wish you a successful mission and a comfortable journey!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给中国太空站的宇航员们的一封信,询问太空站上的生活、工作情况,并向他们表达关心和祝愿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感到骄傲:take pride in→be proud of
非凡的:remarkable→extraordinary →outstanding →marvelous
成就:achievement→ accomplishment
适应:adjust to→ adapt to
定期地:regularly→ on a regular basis
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation.
拓展句:Because I am curious about your life and work in Tiangong space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing with great excitement to tell you how proud I am for your remarkable accomplishments made in China’s space expeditions.(运用了动词不定式作状语,how引导的宾语从句,以及过去分词短语充当后置定语)
【高分句型2】With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation. (运用了with+宾语+宾补的复合结构)
【高分句型3】Additionally, impressed by your interaction with us students in “Tiangong Class”, I cannot help admiring your pioneering work, wondering what it takes to be a qualified taikonaut.(运用了impressed过去分词短语作状语,wandering现在分词短语充当伴随状语以及what引导的宾语从句)
五、双减政策
5.(2021·浙江省宁波市鄞州中学高二期中)自7月24日国家颁布双减政策以来,节假日校外培训纷纷停止。与此同时,9月以来各校校内又纷纷进行周末补课。针对此现象,某英语学习论坛版主发布了一个主题为“Should high school students have lessons at weekends?”的帖子。请你根据以下要点回帖发表自己的看法。
1. 你的观点 2. 陈述理由 3. 结论
注意:
1. 词数:80左右
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】例文:
Possible version 1:
I don't think we should attend classes at weekends. Here are my reasons. First, we are occupied in heavy schoolwork on weekdays and we need weekends to relax ourselves. Otherwise, we will be exhausted, which does harm to our physical fitness. Besides, having lessons on weekends will increase the pressure on us both academically and psychologically, which is against the government’s efforts to ease the burden of excessive homework and improve students’ all-round quality. Last, it is not conducive to cultivating students' autonomous learning habits. To sum up, the losses outweigh the gains.
Possible version 2:
Personally I am in favor of having lessons at weekends. First, studying together with classmates is more efficient than learning alone. We can discuss the difficult problems and work them out. We can also turn to teachers when we have questions. Second, having lessons at weekends benefits the students like me. In my case, I am a person who lacks self-discipline, and my parents are too busy to afford time to be with me. As a result, I’ll probably indulge in the Internet at home at weekends. So balancing the pros and cons, I am for it.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于开放性作文,要求考生就“Should high school students have lessons at weekends?”帖子回帖,发表自己的看法。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
赞成:in favor of→subscribe to
困难的: difficult→tough
缺乏:lack→be short of
因此:as a result→as a consequence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First, studying together with classmates is more efficient than learning alone. We can discuss the difficult problems and work them out. We can also turn to teachers when we have questions.
拓展句:First, studying together with classmates is more efficient than learning alone because not only can we discuss the difficult problems and work them out but also we are able to turn to teachers when we have questions.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 We can also turn to teachers when we have questions.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】 In my case, I am a person who lacks self-discipline, and my parents are too busy to afford time to be with me.(运用了who引导限制性定语从句)
六、传统文化
6.(广东省东莞市2021-2022学年高三上学期期末质量检查英语试题)为弘扬中华传统文化,上周五你校举办了“国潮文化节”。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.活动影响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
China-Chic Cultural Festival
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【答案】例文:
China-Chic Cultural Festival
Last Friday, in order to develop and expand traditional culture, the China-Chic Cultural Festival was held on our school playground.
As is announced, the term \"China-Chic\" characterizes the rise of China's native fashion trends. It has expanded the concept of \"Made in China,\" which is usually regarded as the assurance of the quality of products. The festival was made up of many kinds of meaningful activities, including fashion show, Hanfu design and so on, which were all aimed at raising the students’ sense of national pride. Having fired our passion, the event became a success.
After the festival, all the students were proud of being a Chinese and living in such a peaceful country.
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生对学校上周五举办的“国潮文化节”,为校英文报写一篇
报道。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
弘扬:develop and expand→promote
由……组成:be made up of → consisted of
各种各样的:many kinds of→varieties of
活动:activities→ events
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Friday, in order to develop and expand traditional culture, the China-Chic Cultural Festival was held on our school playground.
拓展句:Last Friday, in order to develop and expand traditional culture, the China-Chic Cultural Festival was held on our school playground., which had an important impact on us.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
It has expanded the concept of \"Made in China,\" which is usually regarded as the assurance of the quality of products. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Having fired our passion, the event became a success.(运用了现在分词作状语)
七、可持续向未来
7.(2021·江苏·模拟预测)假定你是李华,上周末你所在的城市在人民广场举办了主题为“The Earth Is Our Only Home的活动,探讨了环境污染的方方面面,并宣传环保措施。你的外国朋友Henry对此很感兴趣,请你用英语写-封邮件,告诉他活动的具体情况,内容包括:
1.活动时间和地点;
2.活动的内容;
3.活动的效果。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
Is everything all right with you?
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If you want to know more about similar activities you can email me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Henry,
Is everything all right with you? Knowing that you are interested in the activity held in our city, I am more than glad to share it with you.
To raise people's awareness of environmental pollution, our city held an activity themed “The Earth Is Our Only Home\" on People's Square last Sunday. In the activity, a diversity of environmental problems were listed and various kinds of solutions were shared. All the people present promised to do their bit to reduce the environmental pollution, thus making the earth cleaner and more beautiful.
If you want to know more about similar activities, you can e-mail me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求李华给Henry写信,介绍所在城市在周末举办的主题为“The Earth Is Our OnlyHome的活动。
【详解】
1.词汇积累:
对……感兴趣:are interested in→are fascinated by/are enthusiastic about/are
keen on
高兴的:glad→happy→delighted→cheerful→pleased
各种各样的:a diversity of→a variety of→varieties of→various→all kinds of
提高:promote→raise
2.句式拓展:
原句:In the activity, a diversity of environmental problems were listed and various kinds of solutions were shared.
拓展句:It is in the activity that a diversity of environmental problems were listed and various kinds of solutions were shared.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】All the people present promised to do their bit to reduce the environmental pollution, thus making the earth cleaner and more beautiful. (这句话使用了现在分词making做结果状语。)
【高分句型2】To raise people's awareness of environmental pollution, our city held an activity themed “The Earth Is Our Only Home\" on People's Square last Sunday.(这句话使用了动词不定式做目的状语,过去分词themed做后置定语。)
八、学榜样向未来
8.(2021·福建·莆田第二十五中学高二期中)你校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为每一位名人画像配上英语介绍, 以便让同学们有更多的机会学习英语。请你根据以下信息写一篇80词左右介绍张桂梅的短文。
1.张桂梅,云南省丽江华坪女子中学的创办人和校长。2021年6月29日,她被授予中国共产党党内最高荣誉--------七一勋章。
2.1957年出生在黑龙江,17岁时来到云南支教, 经过努力她于2008年建立了第一所免费女子高中。40多年来,她累计将1800多名贫困女孩送入了大学。
3.坚韧、倔强,有决定心的她倾尽全力地付出,为贫困地区的教育做出了巨大的贡献。
4 .她是人人称颂的英雄,是时代的楷模。
Notes:华坪女子中学Huaping High School for girls;
中国共产党党内最高荣誉------七一勋章the highest honor of CPC----the July 1st medal;
【答案】例文:Zhang Guimei, founder and principal of Huaping High School for girls in Yunnan Province, was awarded the highest honor of CPC----the July 1st medal on June 29, 2021.
he was born in Heilongjiang province in 1957. She came to Yunnan as a volunteer teacher at the age of 17. Through hard work, she established the first free high school for girls in 2008 where she has helped more than 1,800 poor girls to college in the past over 40 years. Tough, stubborn and determined, she gave her best and made great contributions to education in poor areas.
She is a universal hero and a model of her time!
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于说明文。学校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为每一位名人画像配上英语介绍,现要求考生撰写一篇关于张桂梅的人物介绍。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建立:found→establish
帮助:assist→help
有决心的:purposeful→determined
贡献:contribute to→make contributions to
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:She was born in Heilongjiang province in 1957. She came to Yunnan as a volunteer teacher at the age of 17.
拓展句:Born in Heilongjiang province in 1957, she came to Yunnan as a volunteer teacher at the age of 17.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Through hard work, she established the first free high school for girls in 2008 where she has helped more than 1,800 poor girls to college in the past over 40 years. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Tough, stubborn and determined, she gave her best and made great contributions to education in poor areas. (运用了形容词作状语)
九、”数字化”撞上”老龄化”
9.(2021·江苏·南京师大苏州实验学校高二阶段练习)假定你是李华,上周末你们班在附近社区的老年人活动中心组织了一次义工活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.陪伴老人,教老人智能手机的生活应用等;
2.活动反响。
注意:
1.写作词汇应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。
A Significant Voluntary Activity
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【答案】例文:
A Significant Voluntary Activity
Last weekend, our class attended a voluntary activity in a community senior center nearby.
Some of us entertained the elderly by singing Nanyin and doing magic tricks. Others chatted with them. They were overjoyed for our coming and the senior center was full of laughter. Besides, we also taught them how to use smartphones in everyday life, such as showing the health QR code, calling a taxi and making an appointment with the doctor. They were impressed by the convenience
technology brings.
The activity is so meaningful that we all feel rewarded and determined to visit them regularly.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道,报道上周末你们班在附近社区的老年人活动中心组织了一次义工活动。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.陪伴老人,教老人智能手机的生活应用等;
2.活动反响。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
attend a voluntary activity; chat with sb.; be full of; such as; make an appointment; be impressed by; so … that …
第三步:连词成句
1. Last weekend, our class attended a voluntary activity in a community senior center nearby.
2. Others chatted with them.
3. They were overjoyed for our coming and the senior center was full of laughter.
4. Besides, we also taught them how to use smartphones in everyday life, such as showing the health QR code, calling a taxi and making an appointment with the doctor.
5. They were impressed by the convenience technology brings.
6. The activity is so meaningful that we all feel rewarded and determined to visit them regularly.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of+ n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Some of us entertained the elderly by singing Nanyin and doing magic tricks.这句话运用了动名词结构。
[高分句型2] Besides, we also taught them how to use smartphones in everyday life, such as showing the health QR code, calling a taxi and making an appointment with the doctor. 这句话运用了“动词+ 疑问词 + to do”结构和动名词
结构。
[高分句型3] The activity is so meaningful that we all feel rewarded and determined to visit them regularly. 这句话运用了so… that …引导的结果状语从句。
十、北京冬奥与中国元素
10.(2022·江苏·南京市第一中学一模)假定你是李华,你的美国网友Peter对“中国成人礼(Chinese coming-of-age ceremony)”很感兴趣。请用英语给他写一封信,以中国传统的“冠笄之礼”为例向他做一个简要介绍,内容包括:
1. 在18岁,中国男孩要行“冠礼Guan Li”,女孩行“笄礼Ji Li”;
2. “冠笄之礼”上,青少年要宣誓爱国家,爱人民,爱家人;
3. 通过仪式,青少年感悟中国传统文化,提升个人精神素养。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I think the coming of age depends entirely on where children live and what
culture they grow up in.
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Looking forward to your letter about the coming of age of the United States.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:Dear Peter,
I think the coming of age depends entirely on where children live and what culture they grow up in.
In some parts of China, there has recently been a popularity of the Chinese Confucian-style coming-of-age ceremonies Ji Li (for girls) and Guan Li (for boys). The ceremonies typically honor youths who have turned 18, and provide a fun opportunity to wear traditional dress, hanfu. They promise to love and serve their homeland, people and families.
Chinese coming-of-age ceremony, allowing teenagers to understand the charm of Chinese traditional culture, is also of great significance for the young
generation to study Chinese traditional formality and improve their personal spiritual quality.
Looking forward to your letter about the coming of age of the United States.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国网友Peter写一封信,向他介绍中国传统的“冠笄之礼”。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
最近:recently→lately
通常:typically→generally
机会:opportunity→chance
提高:improve→enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:They promise to love and serve their homeland, people and families.
拓展句:They promise that they will love and serve their homeland, people and families.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In some parts of China, there has recently been a popularity of the Chinese Confucian-style coming-of-age ceremonies Ji Li (for girls) and Guan Li (for boys).(运用了there be句型的现在完成时)
【高分句型2】The ceremonies typically honor youths who have turned 18, and provide a fun opportunity to wear traditional dress, hanfu.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
十一、电动自行车
11.(2020·江苏镇江·高二期中)《江苏省电动自行车管理条例》已于2020年7月1日起正式实施。请你写一封倡议书,呼吁市民在骑电动自行车时佩戴头盔。
【写作内容】
1.骑行者安全意识薄弱,车祸频发;
2.佩戴头盔的好处:
3.呼吁市民在骑电动车时佩戴头盔.
【写作要求】
1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数:
4.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear fellow citizens,
Standing Committee of Jiangsu Provincial People's Congress has recently issued a regulation that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle. ______________________________________
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【答案】例文:
Dear fellow citizens,
Standing Committee of Jiangsu Provincial People’s Congress has recently issued a regulation that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle.
It is a sad but common phenomenon that traffic accidents happen frequently, which poses a great threat to people’s safety, electric bicycle riders in particular. As for the possible reasons, the lack of safety awareness is a major one. Therefore, top priority should be given to wearing helmets if we are to guarantee our life. Helmets can undoubtedly protect us from possible blow when accidents happen.
I’m appealing to all electric bicycle riders to abide by the regulation and make every endeavor to put safety in the first place by wearing helmets.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书,呼吁市民在骑电动自行车时佩戴头盔。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.骑行者安全意识薄弱,车祸频发;
2.佩戴头盔的好处:
3.呼吁市民在骑电动车时佩戴头盔。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
pose…to…; in particular; lack of; awareness; protect…from…; appeal to; in the first place
第三步:连词成句
1.It is a sad but common phenomenon that traffic accidents happen frequently, which poses a great threat to people’s safety, electric bicycle riders in particular.
2.As for the possible reasons, the lack of safety awareness is a major one.
3.Therefore, top priority should be given to wearing helmets if we are to guarantee our life.
4.Helmets can undoubtedly protect us from possible blow when accidents happen.
5.I’m appealing to all electric bicycle riders to abide by the regulation and make every endeavor to put safety in the first place by wearing helmets.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表因果关系: therefore
2.表转折关系:but
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】
[高分句型1] It is a sad but common phenomenon that traffic accidents happen frequently, which poses a great threat to people’s safety, electric bicycle riders in particular.句中使用了that引导同位语从句,对phenomenon进行解释;which引导非限制定语从句。
[高分句型2] Therefore, top priority should be given to wearing helmets if we are to guarantee our life.句中使用了if引导条件状语从句。
[高分句型3] Helmets can undoubtedly protect us from possible blow when accidents happen.句中使用了when引导时间状语从句。
十二、北京冬残奥会与雪容融
12.(2022·山东·青岛二中高三开学考试)2022年,冬季奥林匹克运动会和残奥会在北京举行。为了弘扬冬奥精神,请你以学生会的名义写一封倡议书,号召大家参与运动。内容包括:
1.运动形式;
2.运动的好处;
3.发出倡议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear boys and girls,
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【答案】例文:Dear boys and girls,
To promote the Winter Olympic spirit, we call on everyone to participate in ice and snow sports, like skiing, skating, ice hockey and so on.
Actually, ice and snow sports benefit us a lot. Doing them can enhance our lung capacity, making us live a more active life in winter. Moreover, it can train our sense of balance, which is important for us as we grow up. Besides, only by skiing, can we improve our strength as well as stay in shape.
Nothing is more interesting than doing ice and snow sports in cold winter days. Let’s take action now !
The Students’ Union
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会的名义写一封倡议书,号召大家参与运动。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
每个人:everyone→everybody
参加:participate in→take part in
像,如同:like→such as
此外:besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To promote the Winter Olympic spirit, we call on everyone to participate in ice and snow sports, like skiing, skating, ice hockey and so on.
拓展句:To promote the Winter Olympic spirit, we call on everyone to participate in ice and snow sports, which includes skiing, skating, ice hockey and so on.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Moreover, it can train our sense of balance, which is important for us as we grow up.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, only by skiing, can we improve our strength as well as stay in shape. (运用了“only+状语”置于句首的部分倒装)
十三、推荐信
13.(2021·浙江·长兴县教育研究中心高二阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校外籍教师Mr. Smith计划在暑假回国,他想挑选一份礼物送给他的朋友Lucy。请给他写一封邮件,向他推荐礼物。内容包括:
1. 推荐礼物;
2. 推荐原因;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】例文:Possible version1:
Dear Mr. Smith,
Hearing that you are looking for a gift for your friend Lucy before returning home, I am writing to recommend the Chinese West Lake Tea.
The West Lake Tea enjoys a widespread popularity in China, not only for its great taste and sweet fragrance, but also for its reasonable price. So a pot of West Lake Tea is a perfect gift, which will immerse Lucy in the charm of Chinese green tea and offer her a glimpse of Chinese tea culture.
I hope my suggestions can be of help and wish you a pleasant journey back home.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version2:
Dear Mr. Smith,
Knowing your intention of selecting a gift for Lucy before returning home, I’m writing to make some recommendations to you.
From my perspective, a white silk scarf could be at the top of your list. Not only does it feel comfortable as an ornament but it is also a symbol of the prosperity of the profound traditional Chinese culture. I’m fully convinced that your friend Lucy will be well satisfied with the distinctive gift.
I Hope my advice could be of some use and wish you a pleasant journey back home!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向外籍教师Mr. Smith推荐礼物送给他的朋友Lucy。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
寻找:look for→in search of
礼物:gift → present
合适的:reasonable →suitable
建议:suggestion→ proposal
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Hearing that you are looking for a gift for your friend Lucy before returning home, I am writing to recommend the Chinese West Lake Tea.
拓展句:I am writing to recommend the Chinese West Lake Tea, because I heard that you are looking for a gift for your friend Lucy before returning home.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The West Lake Tea enjoys a widespread popularity in China, not only for its great taste and sweet fragrance, but also for its reasonable price. (运用了固定句型not only…but also…)
【高分句型2】So a pot of West Lake Tea is a perfect gift, which will immerse Lucy in the charm of Chinese green tea and offer her a glimpse of Chinese tea
culture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
十四、人机关系
14.
(2021·陕西·高新一中模拟预测)假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Jenny正在做一份关于中国移动支付( mobile payment)的问卷调查( survey),你是她的重点采访对象,采访内容如下;请你就这些问题给她回一封邮件完成采访。
采访内容:
1.你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况;
2.移动支付带来的好处
3.你的看法。
参考词汇: 微信: Wechat 支付宝: Alipay 二维码: QR code
注意:1.词数120左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Dear Jenny,
How is your survey on mobile payment going?
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Yours faithfully
Li Hua
【答案】例文:Dear Jenny,
How is your survey on mobile payment going?I’m writing to inform you some specific relevant information and I’m delighted I can help with it.
It is universally acknowledged that China is the largest mobile payment market. China is more obvious in the cashless trend. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes whatever we buy, which is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese like me and my family. With the widespread use of mobile payment, WeChat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay. We hardly need to carry a wallet or cash at all. Additionally, never will we worry about getting
fake notes or having to count change. To conclude, mobile payment has dramatically changed people’s life in China. In terms of me, I think mobile payment should be encouraged. It has won over consumers with its convenience. On the other hand, there are often discounts if you make mobile payment, as major online payment platforms are competing because they want to have more consumers use their service.
Hopefully, the explanation can be of great benefit to you. Wish you good luck.
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jenny回一封信完成关于中国移动支付的问卷调查采访。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
相关的:relevant→related
习惯于:be used to→be accustomed to
几乎不:hardly→rarely
就我而言:In terms of me→As far as I’m concerned/From my perspective/As for me
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:With the widespread use of mobile payment, WeChat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay. We hardly need to carry a wallet or cash at all.
拓展句:With the widespread use of mobile payment, WeChat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay so we hardly need to carry a wallet or cash at all.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It is universally acknowledged that China is the largest mobile payment market. (运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes whatever we buy, which is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese like me and my family. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
十五、当代青年与烦恼
15.
(福建省龙岩第一中学2021-2022学年高一下学期第一次月考英语试题)为了给中学生提供一个倾诉内心困扰的平台,某中学英文报开辟了“Heart -to -Heart ”专栏,假设你是该栏目的编辑Doris,收到一封署名为Tom的求助信,信中该同学向你倾诉了自己的困扰:近日沉溺于电脑游戏,导致精神恍惚,学习下降,而且爱发脾气,以至于和同学父母的关系受到了影响,请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:
1.表示理解,并给予安慰;
2.提出长期打游戏的危害;
3.给出建议,向你信任的人倾诉并共同解决问题,进行户外活动和体育锻炼,合理饮食,保持身体健康。
注意:
1.词数100左右
2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment.
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Yours
Doris
【答案】例文:Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have a period, when you are addicted to some bad habits. So you don’t need to worry so much. However, being addicted to computer games does do harm to your physical and mental health. As a result, if you really want to get out of the trouble, here are some useful tips for you.
First of all, talking to someone who you trust is a good way to solve the problem together. What’s more, in order to help you get rid of addictive games
easily, it’s an effective way to take more exercise, such as running, playing basketball and so on. Last but not (the) least, keeping a balanced diet to keep healthy is necessary, which makes you energetic to study hard to catch up with your classmates in study.
Hope you will feel better and return to normal life soon . Best wishes.
Yours
Doris
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给署名为Tom的同学写封信,对他表示理解,并给予安慰,提出长期打游戏的危害,给出建议。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
然而:however→nevertheless
有用的:useful→helpful
建议:tip→suggestion
此外:what’s more→in addition
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, being addicted to computer games does do harm to your physical and mental health.
拓展句:However, that you are addicted to computer games does do harm to your physical and mental health.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]The truth is that everyone will have a period, when you are addicted to some bad habits. (运用了that引导的表语从句和when引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Last but not (the) least, keeping a balanced diet to keep healthy is necessary, which makes you energetic to study hard to catch up with your classmates in study.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
十六、疫情下的网课
16.(2022·上海·模拟预测)Directions: Write an English composition in I20-l50 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
由于新冠肺炎疫情的发生,国外学生也开始使用钉钉(DingTalk)软件进行在线学习,目前你的国外朋友Tom询问你如何使用其进行在线学习你学校开设的汉语课程。现在你给他回信,告诉他使用的方法及在线汉语课程的特色。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Tom,
I have already received your letter and hope everything goes well with you.
As the outbreak of novel coronavirus, we have to stay at home instead of going to school. Fortunately, we are living in a high-tech era. An application called DingTalk acts as class temporarily. The using methods are simple and convenient. First of all, download this application, enter your class group, then click the button of “class online”, find the live telecast, and then you can learn the class online.
The course of Chinese language online has many advantages. Not only can
you play again and again, but also you can pause and go back at any time if you don’t understand what teachers say. Compared with the traditional class, it is the most important unique skills. Besides, the teacher could put more interesting examples without worrying about time of class because we can speed up the class or skip the chapter we don’t need. How about your ideas?
Looking forward to your reply and feel free to contact me if you have further questions.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是应用文。要求考生给国外朋友Tom回信,告诉他使用钉钉(DingTalk)软件的方法及在线汉语课程的特色。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
收到你的来信:receive your letter→hear from you
因为:as→because of
幸运的是:fortunately→luckily
方法:method→way
此外:Besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:An application called DingTalk acts as class temporarily.
拓展句:An application which is called DingTalk acts as class temporarily.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I have already received your letter and hope everything goes well with you.(由省略连词that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Not only can you play again and again, but also you can pause and go back at any time if you don’t understand what teachers say.(由Not only引导的部分倒装句,if引导的条件状语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]Besides, the teacher could put more interesting examples without worrying about time of class because we can speed up the class or skip the chapter we don’t need.(由because引导的原因状语从句和省略连词that/which引
导的定语从句)
[高分句型4]Looking forward to your reply and feel free to contact me if you have further questions.(由if引导的条件状语从句)
十七、2022年杭州亚运会
17.(2021·浙江·高二阶段练习)假如你是某高中的学生李华, 从海报上得知杭州正在招募亚运会(the Hangzhou Asian Games)志愿者。你有意申请成为其中的一员。请按照下列提示, 写一份申请书。
要点:1.写信目的
2.能提供相应服务和帮助
3.曾是G20杭州峰会志愿者;(G20 Hangzhou Summit)
注意1.词数80左右
2.可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯。
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【答案】例文:Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that you're recruiting volunteers for the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games, I'm writing to apply for a position for the following reasons.
As a Hangzhou native, I am familiar with the local conditions. I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the Games. Outgoing and warm-hearted personalities combined with a good command of English will contribute to smooth communication with foreigners. Most importantly, having worked as a volunteer for G20 Hangzhou Summit, I've gained abundant experience, which makes me more qualified.
With the purpose of promoting friendship among people from different backgrounds, I'm looking forward to your favorable consideration of my application.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是李华,2022年杭州将举办亚运会,你从网上得知杭州亚运会组委会(Hangzhou Asian Games Organ zing Committee)正在招募志
愿者。请考生给组委会写一封信,申请成为志愿者。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
申请:apply for → ask for
熟悉的:familiar→ well-informed
参加:participate in→ take part in
有助于:contribute to→ be conducive to
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As a Hangzhou native, I am familiar with the local conditions.
拓展句:Because I’ m a Hangzhou native, I am familiar with the local conditions.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Knowing that you're recruiting volunteers for the 2022 Hangzhou
Asian Games, I'm writing to apply for a position for the following reasons. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Most importantly, having worked as a volunteer for Olympics, I've gained abundant experience, which makes me more qualified.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
十八、志愿服务让青春“闪光”
18.(2022·河南·许昌市普通教育教学研究室二模)2022年冬奥会在北京如期举行。恰逢中国春节,来自世界各地的运动员们对中国的传统文化产生了很大的兴趣。假如你是志愿者,请选择一种文化讲给他们。内容包括:
1.介绍这种文化(比如节日、艺术、建筑、美食等);
2.这种文化特点;
3.你推荐的理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! Welcome to Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
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【答案】例文:Hello, everyone! Welcome to Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
Hearing that you take great interest in Chinese traditional culture, I’m so honored to introduce you my favorite traditional Chinese festival — the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival, which is the most significant traditional festivals in China, falls on the eve of the lunar New Year and lasts fifteen days. There are a variety of activities taking place during the Spring Festival. All family members will return to their hometowns for a traditional family reunion. People also watch TV gala until the clock strikes 12 and then set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the next fifteen days, people pay a visit to relatives and friends, giving each other their best wishes.
The most amazing thing is that we are right in the Spring Festival now. That is
why I’m recommending it to you and wish you an unforgettable stay in China.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给来自世界各地的运动员介绍一种传统文化(比如节日、艺术、建筑、美食等)。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
重要的:significant → important
持续:last → run
各种各样的:a variety of → all kinds of
拜访:pay a visit to → visit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:There are a variety of activities taking place during the Spring Festival.
拓展句:There are a variety of activities that take place during the Spring
Festival.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The Spring Festival, which is the most significant traditional festivals in China, falls on the eve of the lunar New Year and lasts fifteen days.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] People also watch TV gala until the clock strikes 12 and then set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. (运用了until引导时间状语从句)
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