备考2020年高考英语一轮复习专题测试：开放式作文

一、写作题

1.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Recently, the State Administration of Cultural Heritage (SACH) issued a guidance to open cultural heritage buildings to the public, encouraging local governments, cultural heritage departments and organizations using or managing such buildings to better bring these buildings' cultural and social value into play, on the precondition of full protection. The SACH is clear that, no matter what their current conditions are, heritage buildings should be opened as much as possible.

In the past, due to insufficient preserving technologies and lack of funds, repairing work was seen as a major hassle, and thus opening the buildings to the public was difficult. Even famous heritage places like the Palace Museum in Beijing were plagued by such difficulties.

Today, China has dramatically increased its input into cultural heritage protection, and archaeological protection technologies are improving. The time is ripe for heritage buildings to be opened up. （写作内容）

1）用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2）用约120个单词就“对公众开放文物建筑”这一话题，阐述你的看法，并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。 （写作要求）

1）写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 2）作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3）不必写标题。

（评分标准）内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

2.假如你是李华，你想邀请美国好友John观看京剧表演，但John不在家，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1）你到John家的目的； 2）简要介绍京剧；

3）询问什么时候方便，再约时间。 注意：

1）词数100左右；

2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3）开头语和结尾语已给出，不计入总字数。 提示词汇：京剧 Beijing Opera 3.最近，高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业”的调查，结果见下面的饼状图。请据此写一篇不少于150词的英语短文。 写作要求：

1)介绍调查结果；

2)阐述产生如此结果的原因，可举例说明；

3)就如何合理分配各科作业时间提出自己的看法。 注意： 1)短文的开头已为你写好。

Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students. The results are as follows:

4.澳大利亚风景优美，空气清新, 野生动物多样。假如你是李华，计划在寒假期间与父母前往澳大利亚旅游。请给你的笔友Tom写封e-mail, 询问以下旅游事宜： 1）著名景点； 2） 特色食品； 3）特别注意事项；

4） 推荐一些旅馆和餐馆。

注意：1） 要涵盖所给要点，词数100左右 2） 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3） 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom,

How is everything going recently?…… Best regards Li Hua

5.假定你是李华,正在你校学习汉语的美国交换生Albert对中国古诗词很感兴趣。请用英语给他写封邮件,邀请他一同观看央视频道《经典咏流传》中的一期节目。内容包括： 1）时间、地点和观看人员；

2）内容：欣赏以歌曲形式咏唱的经典古诗词；

3）提醒：提前简要了解一些中国经典古诗词,观后一起谈感受。 注意：1）词数100左右；

2）可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：《经典咏流传》Everlasting Classics Hi Albert, Best,

Li Hua

6.假定你是李华，5月1日在某购买了一部手机（cell phone）。使用一段时间之后，你发现它存在缺陷（如电池不耐用等）。请你给网站的客服写一封投诉信反映问题并提出解决方案。 注意：1） 词数100左右；

2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3）开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam,

Iam one of your customers.…… Yours sincerely Li Hua

7.假定你是李华，想申请加入你校留学生俱乐部，以帮助外国学生学习汉语并了解中国文化。请给俱乐部负责人Mr．Blake 写一封邮件．内容包括： 1）目的； 2）个人情况．

注意：1）词数100左右，邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯． Dear Mr．Blake， Yours，

Li Hua．

8.假定你是李华，你班来自美国的交换生Peter生病住院了。请给他发封邮件，内容包括： 1）表示关心 2）提供帮助 3）祝愿康复。

注意1）词数80左右；

2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

9.假如你是李华，正在英国留学。为了让你的英国同学更好地了解中国文化，你希望可以成立一个中国文学社团(Chinese literature club). 请你参照以下要点提示，用英语给你校学生会负责人Mr. Green写一封信，申请成立该社团。要点提示: 1)点明写信目的;

2)介绍该社团(成立目的，活动内容等); 3)希望能得到批准。 注意:1）词数100左右:

2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

10.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom已经在中国生活了很多年。你校将举办“用英语讲中国故事”的征文活动(essay activity)。 请用英语写一封邮件邀请他写一篇稿件。 要点包括:

1）简单介绍活动目的；

2）要Tom谈谈他在中国的所见所闻； 3）稿件长度约300 词； 4）交稿日期: 4月20日前。 注意:1）词数100左右;

2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 11.假定你是李华，从网上得知你的美国朋友Phil的家乡遭受龙卷风(tornado)袭击。请你写封邮件安慰他。内容包括: 1）说明情况;

2）询问灾情，表示安慰。 注意:1）词数100左右;

2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

12.假如你是王华，18岁生日后，真的有种长大成人的感觉。于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈。信的开头如下： Dear Mum and Dad, How are you doing? Yours sincerely, Wang Hua

13.假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom近日写信给你，想了解中国高中生的体育锻炼情况。请给Tom写一封回信，内容包括：

1）中国高中生参加体育运动的现状，如每周一节体育课等； 2）分析该现状产生的原因； 3）你自己的感想。 注意：

1）词数100左右；

2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3）开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom，

Glad to receive your letter. And I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese high school students' physical exercise. Yours， Hua

14.假定你是大庆实验中学的学生李健。最近，学校打算为同学们制作统一的校服，请你给闫校长写一封建议信，要点如下： 1.写信的目的；

2.对校服的布料，款式等提出建议并说明理由。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Yan, ……

Yours sincerely, Li Jian

15.假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的笔友Chris对中国历史文化很感兴趣，他来信让你介绍一项中国古代的伟大发明，请根据下面的要求给他写一封回信，内容包括：

1）这项古代发明的名称；2）概述这项古代发明；3）这项古代发明的影响。 注意：1）词数不少于50; 2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, Sincerely, Li Hua

16.假定你是李华，得知外教Mr. Hall今年寒假不回国，想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信，内容包括： 1).时间

2).一同过节的家人 3).活动

注意：1). 词数100左右；

2). 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 17.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班交换生Jim要参加面向外国友人的“点赞中国”活动，向你寻求帮助，希望通过亲身体验，更好地认识中国。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1）推荐他做一件事； 2）说明推荐的理由； 3）表达愿望。

注意：1）词数不少于50；

2）邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, Yours,

Li Hua

18.假如你是李华，你的美国好友Alice将近期来你所在的城市旅游。请给她写信，告诉她你愿意为她安排住宿及旅程。同时，委托她帮你买一个Coach牌子的小钱包，你打算将其作为生日礼物送给妈妈。

注意：1.词数120左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Alice, Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

19.现在，越来越多的年轻人喜欢在网上点餐或打电话叫外卖，不愿意自己做饭，就这一现象结合下面的提示，写一篇短文， 1)陈述现象；

2)说明此现象的原因(至少2点）； 3)你个人的看法和选择。

注意： 1)词数100左右； 2)行文连贯，语篇完整； 3)文中不得透露个人真实信息。 参考词汇：外卖店，外卖餐馆take-out restaurant

20.以下是一则关于中国姑娘蔡语婧在波士顿大学毕业演讲的报道，请就此写一篇150词左右的英语作文。

Chinese student praised for inspiring US graduation speech

Receiving her Master of Science in Math Finance from Boston University, Cai Yujing, who comes from Nanjing city east China's Jiangsu Province, spoke about her hometown and family members present at the ceremony, and then shared her 6-year experience studying with students from different cultural backgrounds. In her 7-minute speech, Cai talked about how she adapted to the diverse community at the Questrom School of Business and established mutual understanding with fellow students.

Overcoming awkwardness, nervousness, and even occasional anger when exchanging ideas with people from different countries, she said she also experienced the joy of sharing, inspiring and embracing each other, adding that such an experience opened her mind to learning about and embracing diversity.

Cai's speech won a lot of praise online with some saying her address highlighted the positive perspective of Chinese students. （写作内容）

1). 用约30个单词概述上述报道的主要内容； 2). 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：

⑴简要分析接纳和包容多元化的重要性（至少两点）； ⑵结合实例，谈谈在新环境中如何做到接纳和包容。 （写作要求）

1). 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 2). 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3). 不必写标题。 （评分标准）

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词语适当。

（参考词汇）包容accept v. 接纳 embrace v.

答案解析部分

一、写作题

1.答案 With more input into cultural heritage protection, cultural heritage buildings to the public are encouraged to be opened to the public to better bring these buildings' cultural and social value into play.

I am in favour of this practice. The value of such buildings mainly lies in two aspects. First, they are of archaeological significance; second, they inherit and spread traditional culture and thus promote cultural transmission. If a heritage building is closed, only the first aspect is made use of.

Only opening heritage buildings can fully display their social value, and to make them so is the best way for us to show our respect for such buildings. Besides, opening cultural heritage buildings to the public can best satisfy their demands for spiritual life, thus benefiting the generations to come.

In short, opening cultural heritage buildings to the public is a win-win situation. Only in this way can we inherit our cultural heritages better.

解析 分析本题是一篇读写任务，要求考生根据所给材料1）用约30个单词写出上文概要；2）用约120个单词就“对公众开放文物建筑”这一话题，阐述你的看法，并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。首先，考生应认真阅读所给短文，正确理解文章内容，并要以精炼的语言概括文章的大意。注意，不要进行细节陈述，只要简要概括即可。其次，考生要就文章主题提出自己的看法，要给出具体的理由或者举出例证来证明自己的观点。这一部分给了作者比较大的写作自由，同时也有一定的难度。考生可以先写出主题句，列出提纲，然后再补充细节内容。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

点评本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：With more input into cultural heritage protection, cultural heritage buildings to the public are encouraged to be opened to the public to better bring these buildings' cultural and social value into play.运用了被动语态和不定式作目的状语；If a heritage building is closed, only the first aspect is made use of.运用了时间状语从句；to make them so is the best way for us to show our respect for such buildings.运用了不定式作主语；Only in this way can we inherit our cultural heritages better.运用了倒装句。 2.答案Dear John,

With the purpose of inviting you to see Beijing Opera with me next week, I came to your apartment this morning, only to find that you were out.

Since you have shown a keen interest in Chinese culture since the first day to China, I do believe this is a good chance for you to gain insight into it. Regarded as one of the cultural treasures of China, Beijing Opera is more than just music and singing; it also combines drama, dancing, and martial arts, which makes it one of the most varied art forms in the world. The performers in fascinating costumes perform well-known stories in history to audience. I can tell you more about it when we meet.

Please let me know when you will be available and I will buy the tickets in advance. I sincerely hope that you can accept my invitation and I'm sure you'll enjoy it. Yours, Li Hua

解析 分析本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给美国好友John写封邮件，邀请他观看京剧表演。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你到John家的目的；2）简要介绍京剧；3）询问什么时候方便，再约时间。写作时考生根据所给提示，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的要点写全，语句通顺，而且要准确运用时态、语态，使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

点评本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用

了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如： With the purpose of inviting you to see Beijing Opera with me next week, I came to your apartment this morning, only to find that you were out.运用了不定式作结果状语和宾语从句；Since you have shown a keen interest in Chinese culture since the first day to China, I do believe this is a good chance for you to gain insight into it. 运用了原因状语从句，强调句和宾语从句；it also combines drama, dancing, and martial arts, which makes it one of the most varied art forms in the world. 运用了非性定语从句； I can tell you more about it when we meet.运用了时间状语从句；Please let me know when you will be available and I will buy the tickets in advance. 运用了祈使句。

3.答案 Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students.

The results are as follows: more than half of the students, about %, usually put their math homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the most important. Meanwhile, English is regarded as most significant by 18% of the participants, and the other subjects attract the attention of 21% of the students. Undoubtedly, the results reflect the position of each subject in Gaokao. As one of the fundamental subjects, math always comes first in all subjects. Besides, some students hold the view that math is most interesting and challenging, and it seems easier for us to have a sense exists of achievement in it. By contrast, some students, especially boys, find it hard to obtain immediate results when doing Chinese and English homework.

However, each subject has its unique charm and they are of the same value. Therefore, I think we should take every subject seriously and improve our studies in a balanced way. 解析 分析本提示一篇说明文，要求考生根据饼状图，就最近，高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业”，写一篇调查报告。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1)介绍调查结果；2)阐述产生如此结果的原因，可举例说明；3)就如何合理分配各科作业时间提出自己的看法。要求考生有较强的读图能力，围绕所给提纲，写作时紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。同时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

点评本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：more than half of the students, about %, usually put their math homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the most important. 运用了并列句；some students hold the view that math is most interesting and challenging运用了同位语从句； some students, especially boys, find it hard to obtain immediate results when doing Chinese and English homework.运用了it作形式宾语和现在分词作状语；I think we should take every subject seriously and improve our studies in a balanced way.运用了宾语从句。 4.答案Dear Tom,

How is everything going recently? I have longed to visit your country, an amazing land with beautiful scenery, fresh air and colorful wildlife. My dream will come true in the coming winter vacation. Now I'm writing to ask for some information.

First，please tell me what places of interest we can pay a visit to while in Australia. Besides, I am interested in the local food there. Would you please introduce some typical food to us? Also, I'd like to know if there is anything special that we should be aware of. At last, would you please recommend some good hotels and restaurant where we can experience a truly wonderful life in Australia? I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience. Best regards, Li Hua

解析 分析这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 注意语气。要注意语气应该比较恳切。4.文章开头应表明写作目的。本文的难点在于该以什么样的方式询问，每条信息的询问应采取不同的方式这样作文才会显得

新颖独特，而且信息之间的连接也要用不同的词避免重复 5.答案Possible Version I: Hi Albert,

How is everything? As you are into classical Chinese poetry, I'm writing to invite you to join us in watching an attractive variety show called Everlasting Classics at 7:00 p.m. on May 10th in Room 603 in the Office Building.

It is a hit program on CCTV 3, where a lot of classic Chinese poems are chanted in beautiful tunes. We plan to exchange our reviews after watching the show together, so you'd better learn in advance some poems to be shown and their background. The list of them is attached to the email, handy for you to refer to. I'm looking forward to your participation and I believe you will enjoy it and learn a lot. Best wishes, Li Hua

Possible Version II Hi Albert,

How is it going? I know you show great interest in classical Chinese poetry. I warmly invite you to appreciate one episode of a TV program named Everlasting Classics on CCTV this week.

It helps people enjoy some beautiful classic Chinese poems performed in the form of popular songs. All exchange students are welcome to watch it at the lecture hall at 5 o'clock p.m. on Friday. It's a good idea to learn some of classic Chinese poems in advance, which can help you understand them better then. After watching the program, we can share what impresses us most with others. I sincerely expect you to come and see you then. Best wishes, Li Hua

解析 分析本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给正在你校学习汉语的美国交换生Albert写一封邮件，邀请他一同观看央视频道《经典咏流传》中的一期节目。写作背景：Albert对中国古诗词很感兴趣。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）时间、地点和观看人员；2）内容：欣赏以歌曲形式咏唱的经典古诗词；3）提醒：提前简要了解一些中国经典古诗词,观后一起谈感受。考生需要根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

点评本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Possible Version I中 As you are into classical Chinese poetry, I'm writing to invite you to join us in watching an attractive variety show called Everlasting Classics at 7:00 p.m. on May 10th in Room 603 in the Office Building.运用了原因状语从句和过去分词作定语； It is a hit program on CCTV 3, where a lot of classic Chinese poems are chanted in beautiful tunes.运用了非性定语从句；. We plan to exchange our reviews after watching the show together, so you'd better learn in advance some poems to be shown and their background. 运用了并列句； I believe you will enjoy it and learn a lot.运用了宾语从句。在Possible Version II中I know you show great interest in classical Chinese poetry.和 After watching the program, we can share what impresses us most with others.运用了宾语从句； It helps people enjoy some beautiful classic Chinese poems performed in the form of popular songs. 运用了过去分词作定语； It's a good idea to learn some of classic Chinese poems in advance, which can help you understand them better then.运用了it作形式主语和非性定语从句。 6.答案 I'm writing to make a complaint about your goods.

I bought a cell phone from your online store on May 1st. After using it one week, I found some problems. To begin with, the battery needs recharging after it is used for only several hours. It is very upsetting because I have to carry the charger all the time. In addition, the small scratches in the middle of the screen make it

difficult to read. What's worse, it often crashes without any warning. Therefore, I would like you to either change the cell phone for a new one that works well or give me a full refund.

I would appreciate it if you could give due attention to this matter. Looking forward to your reply. 解析 分析本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封投诉信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封投诉信；5月1日你在某购买了一部手机（cell phone）；使用一段时间之后，你发现它存在缺陷（如电池不耐用等），现在你给网站的客服写一封投诉信反映问题并提出解决方案。时态应使用一般过去时和一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：online store（网店），battery（电池），charge（充电），crash（死机），change（调换），refund（退款）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

点评范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如时间状语从句To begin with, the battery needs recharging after it is used for only several hours.；原因状语从句It is very upsetting because I have to carry the charger all the time.；定语从句Therefore, I would like you to either change the cell phone for a new one that works well or give me a full refund.；虚拟语气I would appreciate it if you could give due attention to this matter.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，To begin with，In addition，What's worse，Therefore等词（组）的使用，使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 7.答案Dear Mr．Blake， I'm Li Hua，a girl student in Grade Two．I'm writing to apply to join the Foreign Students Club to help the foreign students learn Chinese well and get a good understanding of Chinese culture．

I'm sure I can be a qualified member．Firstly，I'm easy-going and love to make friends throughout the world．Secondly，my family has so far hosted five foreign students，so I'm experienced in communicating with foreigners．Besides，I can speak English fluently as well as having a rich knowledge of Chinese culture．I do hope you can accept my application and I promise to do all I can to help them． Looking forward to your early reply． Yours， Li Hua

解析 分析本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给俱乐部负责人Mr．Blake 写一封邮件，申请加入你校留学生俱乐部，以帮助外国学生学习汉语并了解中国文化。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）目的；2）个人情况。本题对哦考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。写作时需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

点评本文提出的理由充分，语气中肯礼貌。段落层次清晰，行文连贯，要点齐全，言简意赅，目的明确，较具有说服力。还使用一些连词，让文章条理清楚。使用了一些复杂句和复合句，使文章更加生动而流畅，这些都体现了较强的驾驭语言的能力。具体如下： I'm sure I can be a qualified member．运用了宾语从句；my family has so far hosted five foreign students，so I'm experienced in communicating with foreigners．运用了并列句；I do hope you can accept my application and I promise to do all I can to help them．运用了强调句和定语从句。同时使用了Firstly； Secondly；Besides等过渡词的使用，使文章更加连贯流畅。apply to join the Foreign Students Club；get a good understanding of；experienced in communicating with；having a rich knowledge of等短语的使用增加了文章的可读性。 8.答案Dear Peter,

I'm terribly sorry to hear that you are ill and in hospital. How are you feeling now?

Our head teacher told me you would be absent from school for half a month. Do relax and don't worry about your studies. Some classmates are going to visit you on weekends and we are all willing to help you

with your school work if necessary.

We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery. Best, Li Hua

解析 分析本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给你班来自美国的交换生Peter发封邮件，对他生病住院表示慰问，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）表示关心；2）提供帮助；3）祝愿康复。只给出了写作框架考生，考生需要合理发挥想象力，是一篇半开放型作文。写作时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意时态的选择，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，恰当选择词汇和句型，灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。

点评本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：I'm terribly sorry to hear that you are ill and in hospital. 运用了不定式作原因状语以及宾语从句；Our head teacher told me you would be absent from school for half a month. 运用了宾语从句；Some classmates are going to visit you on weekends and we are all willing to help you with your school work if necessary.运用了省略句。同时使用了高级词汇terribly，be absent from，Do relax，are willing to提高了文章的档次；恰当使用一些连词Additionally、插入语，使文章表达更加自然。 9.答案Dear Mr. Green,

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student of this school. 1 am writing this letter to ask for permission to found a Chinese literature club.

I aim to help my British classmates have a better understanding of Chinese literature by holding a series of literature related activities, like reading Chinese poems. It is planned to recruit (招募) 25 members, and as the person in charge of the club,I will assign a different task to them every week. Besides this, I will also organize courses about Chinese literary giants and their representative works. I am confident that the Chinese literature club will help every member a great deal, not only in learning more about foreign culture, but also in broadening their vision.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, LiHua

解析 分析本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给学生会负责人Mr. Green写一封信，申请成立一个中国文学社团。写作背景：你正在英国留学，为了让你的英国同学更好地了解中国文化，你希望可以成立一个中国文学社。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1)点明写信目的;2)介绍该社团(成立目的，活动内容等);3)希望能得到批准。考生需要根据所给提纲，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

点评本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：It is planned to recruit (招募) 25 members...运用了it作形式主语和被动语态； I am confident that the Chinese literature club will help every member a great deal, not only in learning more about foreign culture, but also in broadening their vision.运用了宾语从句和not only...but also...结构； Thank you for your time and consideration.运用了祈使句。同时ask for permission；a Chinese literature club；in charge of the club；in broadening their vision短语的使用，增加了文章的可读性。 10.答案Dear Tom,

I'm Li Hua. How have you been these days? Our school will hold an essay activity called “Tell Chinese stories in English”. I'm writing to invite you to take part in it.

The activity is aimed at presenting the new image of China and helping people learn more about her. Having been living here for several years, you must have a lot to write about the topic. The contents could

range from food and climate to customs and tourist spots. Please send an essay of around 300 words to me before the 20th April if you are interested. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua

解析 分析本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份邀请英国笔友Tom参加你校举办的“用英语讲中国故事”的征文活动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）简单介绍活动目的；2）要Tom谈谈他在中国的所见所闻；3）稿件长度约300 词；4）交稿日期: 4月20日前。考生写作时注意要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。 点评本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：Having been living here for several years, you must have a lot to write about the topic. 运用了现在分词短语作状语；Please send an essay of around 300 words to me before the 20th April if you are interested.运用了祈使句和条件状语从句。 11.答案Dear Phil.

I'm sorry to learn about from the Internet that your hometown was struck by the tornado the day before yesterday. According to the video of the report, the tornado was so strong that it brought about a lot of losses. Many houses were destroyed and worse still, many people were injured or some even killed.

Seeing the disaster, I have been worried about you and your family. I'm anxious to know your present situations. Please tell me what you experienced these days. I know that help has already arrived. I hope that everything is all right for you!

I'm looking forward to hearing from you! Yours, Li Hua

解析 分析本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给家乡遭受龙卷风袭击的美国朋友Phil写一封邮件，以示安慰。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）说明情况;2）询问灾情，表示安慰。要求考生根据所给提纲要点，为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，紧紧围绕中心，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。同时考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

点评本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如： I'm sorry to learn about from the Internet that your hometown was struck by the tornado the day before yesterday.运用了不定式作原因状语和宾语从句；the tornado was so strong that it brought about a lot of losses.运用了结果状语从句；Please tell me what you experienced these days. 运用了祈使句和宾语从句；I know that help has already arrived.和 I hope that everything is all right for you!运用了宾语从句。 12.答案Dear Mum and Dad,

How are you doing? I'm writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.

Dear Mum and Dad, I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up. Whenever I am thinking of this, I can't help feeling grateful to you. It is you who first give me encouragement when I meet with difficulties, especially when I am not getting along well with my studies. Indeed, your inspiration seems to be a lamp, which offers me light of hope, courage and confidence. And more importantly, you are always teaching me to be good to others, and try to contribute to our society.

Dear Mum and Dad, I am now a senior three student, who is facing the competitive national college entrance examinations. So first of all, I ought to try my best to pass the exams. I am sure that through my

great efforts I can and will be able to realize my beautiful dream of being a key university student. Then, I will strive to be an independent youth. The social situation I will be facing must be more competitive, so I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of cooperation and competition. Believe in me, Mum and Dad, I will make a difference. Best regards to you Yours sincerely, Wang Hua

解析 分析本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给父母写一封信。试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是“你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈＂。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。

点评本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up. 运用了定语从句和宾语从句；The social situation I will be facing must be more competitive, so I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of cooperation and competition. 运用了并列句。 13.答案Dear Tom,

Glad to receive your letter. And I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese high school students' physical exercise. With the increasing pressure from the national college entrance exam，more and more students have to sacrifice the time for sports to prepare for the exam, which is so important for their future development. They only have one PE class a week, obviously not enough. Actually, most of the students are eager to take part in sports, but they are so occupied with their study.

In my view, although it is important for them to have a better performance in the exam, health is equally important. Without a strong body, we would achieve nothing in our life. I hope all students can reorganize their timetable and try to build up their body. Yours, Li Hua

解析 分析本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给美国朋友Tom写一封回信。写作背景：Tom近日写信给你，想了解中国高中生的体育锻炼情况。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）中国高中生参加体育运动的现状，如每周一节体育课等；2）分析该现状产生的原因；3）你自己的感想。本题对考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。写作时需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。同时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，以及使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

点评本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：more and more students have to sacrifice the time for sports to prepare for the exam, which is so important for their future development.运用了非性定语从句；Actually, most of the students are eager to take part in sports, but they are so occupied with their study.运用了并列句；although it is important for them to have a better performance in the exam, health is equally important. 运用了让步状语从句； Without a strong body, we would achieve nothing in our life. 运用了虚拟语气；I hope all students can reorganize their timetable and try to build up their body.运用了宾语从句。 14.答案Dear Mr. Yan,

Knowing that our school will order uniform for us, I am writing to make some suggestions.

Our uniform is worn almost every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like. First of all, I'd prefer it to be made of cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin. Second, it's

tiring to see the same clothes everywhere at school, so please let boys and girls have different uniforms. Third, I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. All students can vote and choose their favorite styles.

I'd be honored if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Jian

解析 分析本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出，写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

点评本文是一篇英语书信，格式正确，内容齐全，布局合理，运用高级句子。Knowing that our school will order uniform for us, I am writing to make some suggestions.现在分词作时间状语；Our uniform is worn almost every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like.并列句和条件句完美结合；I'd prefer it to be made of cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin.原因状语从句用在句中；I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. suggest作“建议”讲，后面的宾语从句用虚拟语气（should）+动词原形；另外，First of all，Second，Third，I'd be honored if的运用为文章增色添彩。 15.答案Dear Chris,

It's great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history and culture. It is my pleasure to introduce a great invention of ancient China —movable type printing (活字印刷术) to you.

Movable type printing was invented by Bi Sheng in Song dynasty. Bi Sheng engraved the Chinese characters on small cubes of sticky clay. He then baked them in the fire until they became hard, movable character.

Movable type printing has a far-reaching influence on human civilization and social progress. Compared to block printing technique (雕版印刷术), movable type printing greatly improved the speed and the quality of printing. It is regarded as one of Four Great Inventions in Chinese history as well as one of the country's important contributions to the world.

I hope my introduction can be of some help. Is there any great invention of ancient time that also plays an important role in your country? I'm looking forward to your reply. Sincerely, Li Hua

解析 分析本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份给笔友Chris写一封回信，介绍一项中国古代的伟大发明。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）这项古代发明的名称；2）概述这项古代发明；3）这项古代发明的影响。考生写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。

点评本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： It is my pleasure to introduce a great invention of ancient China —movable type printing (活字印刷术) to you.运用了it作形式主语；He then baked them in the fire until they became hard, movable character.运用了时间状语从句；It is regarded as one of Four Great Inventions in Chinese history as well as one of the country's important contributions to the world.运用了被动语态； I hope my introduction can be of some help.运用了宾语从句；Is there any great invention of ancient time that also plays an important role in your country？运用了定语从句。 16.答案Dear Mr. Hall,

I'm writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19. It's traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We'll make dumplings together and have a big dinner. We'll also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents. If you're able to come, I'll go and pick you up at your place.

Best wishes Li Hua

解析 分析本文是一篇书信类作文，要求考生以李华的身份给外教Mr. Hall写一封信，想邀请他到你家过春节。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1).时间；2).一同过节的家人；3).活动。考生在成文时应注意：合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。

点评本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如： If you're able to come, I'll go and pick you up at your place.运用了条件状语从句；使用了大量高中生熟悉的词汇traditionally， family reunion，have a big dinner，are able to， pick you up；恰当使用一些连词、插入语so 、also 、may even，使文章表达自然，流畅。 17.答案Dear Jim,

I'm glad to learn that you are going to participate in the activity “Thumbs-up for China”. Let me give you some advice.

I suggest you take the “Fuxing” bullet train, which travels at a speed of about 350 kilometers per hour. I'm sure you'll get a clear idea of what high technology brings to China. Besides, you can enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way. This experience will help you develop a deeper understanding of China and I do hope you can share your impression with the people around you.

Hope my advice can be of some help. If there is anything else I could do, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua

解析 分析本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份给交换生Jim写一封电子邮件。写作背景：Jim要参加面向外国友人的“点赞中国”活动，向你寻求帮助，希望通过亲身体验，更好地认识中国。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）推荐他做一件事；2）说明推荐的理由；3）表达愿望。考生写作时要注意条理清楚，观点明确，要点全面，态度诚恳，还要注意主动语态和被动语态交替使用。写作时要认真阅读前面的提示，根据所给要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

点评本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如： I'm glad to learn that you are going to participate in the activity “Thumbs-up for China”.运用了不定式作原因状语和宾语从句； I suggest you take the “Fuxing” bullet train, which travels at a speed of about 350 kilometers per hour.运用了宾语从句，虚拟语气和非性定语从句； I do hope you can share your impression with the people around you.运用了强调句；Hope my advice can be of some help. 运用了祈使句和宾语从句； If there is anything else I could do, please let me know.运用了条件状语从句。 18.答案Dear Alice,

How is everything getting along with you? I am delighted to hear that you will come to my city for sightseeing. I am writing to tell you my willingness to make arrangements for your tour.

As for accommodation, you have the option of either staying in my home or in a hotel, which I can reserve for you in advance if you like. Besides, I'd like to help you work out a travel schedule. By the way, could you do me a favor and purchase a Coach purse if it doesn't bother you? With my mother's birthday approaching, I wish to present it to her as a birthday gift.

Looking forward to meeting you soon. I hope you will have fun here. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

解析 分析要求要点：告诉她你愿意为她安排住宿及旅程。同时，委托她帮你买一个Coach牌子的小钱包。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下

文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

点评本文是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，属于提纲类作文，要注意信件的格式和特殊用词。根据材料内容可知本文要使用第一，二人称，因为是书信，所以时态不复杂，用一般现在时态和将来时态，写作的话题为假如你是李华，你的美国好友Alice将近期来你所在的城市旅游。请给她写信，告诉她你愿意为她安排住宿及旅程。同时，委托她帮你买一个Coach牌子的小钱包，你打算将其作为生日礼物送给妈妈。 写作步骤：

一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。 1. 告诉她你愿意为她安排住宿及旅程；

2.委托她帮你买一个Coach牌子的小钱包，你打算将其作为生日礼物送给妈妈。； 3.你的祝福。

二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。 be delighted to do..., make arrangements for ..., As for accommodation，have the option of ..., in advance,Besides, work out, a travel schedule，By the way, purchase , approach, Looking forward to, have fun . 三、组词成句连句成篇。注意使用多种句型。

I am delighted to hear that you will come to my city for sightseeing. tell you my willingness to make arrangements for your tour.

As for accommodation, you have the option of either staying in my home or in a hotel, By the way, could you do me a favor and purchase a Coach purse if it doesn't bother you? With my mother's birthday approaching, I wish to present it to her as a birthday gift.

点评考查对所学知识的综合应用，熟练使用相关短语，单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，人称的使用。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

19.答案 Nowadays, a growing number of young people would rather order food on the Internet or call a take-out restaurant for meals than cook at home.

It's not surprising for them to do so. For one thing, with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, time is quite precious. In their eyes, it is unnecessary to take time to cook. For another thing, home cooking food is simpler in kind and less delicious, especially for those who are particular about food.

In my view, our health is closely related to what we eat. The busier we are, the more attention we should pay to food. Therefore, I prefer to cook food at home and go on a balanced diet.

解析 分析本题是一篇提纲类作文，写作背景：现在，越来越多的年轻人喜欢在网上点餐或打电话叫外卖，不愿意自己做饭。要求考生就这一现象写一篇短文，写作要点已经给出，内容包括：1)陈述现象；2)说明此现象的原因(至少2点）；3)你个人的看法和选择。要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。写作时需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。同时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，以及使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

点评本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：a growing number of young people would rather order food on the Internet or call a take-out restaurant for meals than cook at home.运用了比较从句；with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, time is quite precious. 运用了with的复合结构；it is unnecessary to take time to cook.运用了it作形式主语； home cooking food is simpler in kind and less delicious, especially for those who are particular about food.运用了性定语从句；In my view, our health is closely related to what we eat运用了宾语从句；The busier we are, the more attention we should pay to food. 运用了“The+比较级...，the+比较级...”结构。同时 For one thing；For another thing等过渡词的使用，使文章更加流畅连贯。

20.答案 Cai Yujing's graduation speech has won widespread applause, in which she shared some of her

experiences while studying abroad and emphasized the significance of accepting and embracing diversity.(28 words)

Personally, it is of critical importance to accept and embrace diversity. To begin with, undeniably, there exist various cultures, races and lifestyles worldwide. Acceptance of differences can help construct a harmonious atmosphere. Moreover, exposed to a new environment, we should adapt ourselves and fit in. Thus, shared understanding can be achieved and mutual learning can be promoted, which can enhance our personal growth.

Take myself as an example. On the first day of my high school, I felt nervous, surrounded by classmates with different academic and family backgrounds. But once I opened my mind, I overcame uneasiness and nervousness. We participated in class activities and learned from each other. In my mind, embracing diversity means opening a door to a happy life.(1 words)

解析 分析本文属于任务型读写。首先要求考生归纳短文内容，也就是要抓住短文的中心思想。这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，本文主要讲述了一位中国女研究生在毕业典礼上的精彩演讲，她在演讲中强调了接受和接触多元文化的重要性。概括时注意要抓住文章的主题。本文属于开放性的作文，写作过程中，考生一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。看清题目要求，然后再以约120个词写一篇短文，切记不要忘记结合实例介绍，并要发表自己的观点。同时注意准确运用时态，尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，尤其注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，文章更有文采。

点评本篇范文结构非常合理，第一段归纳总结短文内容；第二段论述了接受多元文化的重要性；第三段中介绍了自己的做法。时态和人称运用准确无误，显示了很高的驾驭语言的能力。作者在范文中使用了较多的高级句式，如定语从句：... in which she shared some of her experiences while studying abroad and emphasized the significance of accepting and embracing diversity.分词短语作状语：exposed to a new environment, we should adapt ourselves and fit in. .条件状语从句：once I opened my mind, I overcame uneasiness and nervousness. 这些写作技巧的运用让文章整体上了一个台阶。